OMG. You write all my favorite pairings. First Will/Sue and now Rachel/Will (which I know is kind of wrong but still ♥)
Love this but definitely agree with above reviewers when they said they felt uncomfortable reading the sex scene. Which is important as this is definitely a sensitive storyline.
You've done such a good job with this fic. I love how you characterize Rachel. She's so sad and embarrassed at the start when she's tripped and that's a side of Rachel we rarely see.
Love this line: Her peripheral vision is non-existent, a loss of sight born out of self-preservation and self-direction. - perfect ♥
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Date: 2011-01-18 06:39 pm (UTC)Love this but definitely agree with above reviewers when they said they felt uncomfortable reading the sex scene. Which is important as this is definitely a sensitive storyline.
You've done such a good job with this fic. I love how you characterize Rachel. She's so sad and embarrassed at the start when she's tripped and that's a side of Rachel we rarely see.
Love this line:
Her peripheral vision is non-existent, a loss of sight born out of self-preservation and self-direction. - perfect ♥