This comment is just fantastic and so flattering - thank you so much for taking the time to write it. <3
I'm really, really pleased that Will's POV came through here - it was a real challenge for me to try and write it through another character's perspective, since I usually write directly from Will's POV. And Rachel's lack of reciprocation was important for me to try and get across; I think actually making that move, especially in this context, would be really anxiety-provoking for her.
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Date: 2011-01-18 04:48 pm (UTC)I'm really, really pleased that Will's POV came through here - it was a real challenge for me to try and write it through another character's perspective, since I usually write directly from Will's POV. And Rachel's lack of reciprocation was important for me to try and get across; I think actually making that move, especially in this context, would be really anxiety-provoking for her.