Holy cow. Something like this, even in regards to fiction, needs to be handled in a certain way and I really think you did brilliantly. I adore how you play off the sense of loneliness that they both share. I also love how it all seems to come together at the end with Rachel's statement about wondering if she's still a virgin bringing everything crashing back to earth.
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Date: 2011-01-18 05:59 am (UTC)You did an absolutely fantastic job with this ♥